Chain Writing-Alice Changed!! Class 24

THIS essay is written in class 24 in GLPS by my friend and my self. we turned paper in 10 minutes. You should try this!!
It's funny how the story turns out!!^^
->Does it make sense?Some parts didn't make sense but it was okay

->Do you like how it turned out? yes I did this was what  I expected

 ->How did it change? it changed that Alice became nice and kind

->What would you have done differently? no fighting (I hate violence)

Please enjoy my story^^

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<Sonia>     Once upon a time, in a small town, a girl named Alice lived. She was known as an orphan girl who married for money, and the best gossiper in the town.  She was a pretty girl with white skin, black hair, blue-green eyes, tall, skinny, but mean. She had no friends except for ones whoact like friends in orther to get money.
<Annie>     One day, Alice was strolling by the lake with her husband. It was in night time. Beside her self and and her husband, 15 maids followed them in a row. "George, isn't that lake beutiful?" Alice asked her husband excitely. However George didn't answer her as usual. Alice's husband always ignores Alice, because he hates her same as the others. He wanted to divorce, but because of  his high status in society, he couldn't. Alice was dissapointed.
<Kevin>     Alice was angry that she went back home with her maids. When Alice's husband, George, came back home, Alice was gone. George was happy and asked his maids "Where did she go to?". But the maids didn't answer because Alice ordered them not to answer her husband. George got angry and wanted to fires the maids. Butif he fires them, the maids will be gone and he couldn't do his work well. Finally George decided to divorce with Alice. That time, Alicewas in her friend's house. She was complaining about her husband. Her friend was the queen of the country and letted Alice to live in the castle. George wasa servant to Alice's friend. As a result, both of them was trying to be apart from each other. George wantedto divorce withAlice, and Alice wanted to be away from George.
      After they divorced, Alice married a new husband who was rich. For the first few weeks, they lived happily.However, one day, George fiured out that Alice's new husband was one of his old waiters. George brokein to Alice's house to have a fight with the new husband, who knew where Alice was and was married to her!!
<Ace>     George kept hitting the maid and the maid was injured badly. George saw his bloody hand and clothes, and ran away. Alice told the police and the police tried to arrest him. But it wasn't easy as George was a kick-boxing  player before. Finally, George got arrested. Horray!!!
<Jenny> Alice becme a kind person by a new lesson. Alice lived happily ever after with her new husband.
THE END